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Thursday, August 30, 2018
My Pop
The wrinkley skin on his face looks like a snake twisting around and around. His brown eyes look like a stained piece wood and his white hair looks like sheep's wool.
He has a very loud voice and walks like an old man. He is very mature and loves rugby and golf.
He affects me because he's a great pop and he’s gives me hugs and would not hurt you and occasionally he buys me lunch.
He collects golf balls and loves cleaning his car.
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Next time, you could put more stuff on your blog it will get you more comments.
ReplyDeleteis this archie from my football team? thank you for the advise archie.
Deletei have told angus heaps to put more stuff on his blog but he doesent listen.
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Deletei agree angus does not put any attention to blog stuff.
ReplyDeletereally ok i will change that
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