This week we have been learning to write with six sentences
Once there was a lonely guy called Jeez and out of the ordinary he disappeared into Icy woods. He used to live in Travis Wet woods in a house of of snow. His favorite thing to do was making animal ice sculptures. But his problem was it was coming into spring and his ice sculptures were going to melt. He felt his amazing talent was going to end. He thought for a minute and he released he had his carving skills he was going to ask his dad who gave him his carving skills and ask for weather skills as well so his carvings wouldn't melt so he changed the weather and lived happily for the rest of his life ice carving.
Friday, September 21, 2018
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Wow Angus that's a great peace of writing there angy man. its me.
ReplyDeletethank you ashton
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