Wednesday, June 16, 2021
Spencer park trip
Yesterday we ran to Spencer park , for some people it was extremely difficult because it was a 7km run. i had the job of putting up signs so the people behind us wouldn't get lost , i was also on a bike because i am injured so i wasn't allowed to run there , at one point i think some of the people were going to drop to the ground like flies. when we got to Spencer park people were exhausted and drained out , most people were so happy to get a rest while our group were not that tired , Mr Redmond (our teacher) said ' right ' o boys go get a sausage everyone just started running of to the bbq. we were waiting in line and our stomachs we rumbling i was so hungry because by the time we got there it was like 12:30. after we scoffed our sausage's we went and played man hunt , there were these hedges that i hid up i lasted the whole game there. overall the Spencer park trip was really fun and i enjoyed it
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Angus, I'm glad you were able to do the 7km, even though your ankle is still recovering. You have used a lot of really good descriptive language in the piece, well done! Next time double check you are consistent in your use of 'I' not 'i'.
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